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Rick Barooah's avatar

Great post! I like the inclusion of where and how in the middle and at the end. This adds depth.

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Rizwan's avatar

Thanks for pointing this detail out. Honestly, I didn’t even realize I did that. 😅

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Zan Tafakari's avatar

Beautiful poem - you should publish more!

The last line hits hard

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Rizwan's avatar

Thanks for your encouraging words, Zan. I will do that. 🙏🏽

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